Raymond surely is looking down on us from heaven for this crime against god.
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Raymond surely is looking down on us from heaven for this crime against god.
Yes, father, I have sined!
I like the feeling of it, the live action intro and outro was nice. The cartoon was a little funny but i feel like the punchline could have been a bit stronger. I'm fine with the content and the animation was pretty good.
A lot of it is more amusing than laugh-out-loud funny, I suppose the pnchline could have been more impactful, but I'm a big fan of anticlimax, sometimes to the detriment of my videos.
Thanks for the critique.
UuUhhHhghggg! That end bit was great. Simple and effective.
Thanks a lot. Sadly based on a true story.
I had hoped you would have used swivel to exort this into a .mov file. I'm sorry I didn't communicate with you on that. It lowers the quality to have it uploaded as is without proper formatting. I could have put a stop code in there if I knew you were uploading just the swf.
Glad I could help but wish I had talked about the little details of uploading.
I don't even have Swivel installed, but I get your point. I could install Swivel and replace the .swf with .mov at some point.
And yeah, communication is key.
I don't know why this doesn't have more views you had some good timing with your jokes and some well drawn characters. There wasn't much actual animation and the entire thing seemed simplistic by design. I think if more time had gone into movement maybe it could have turned out better
Trust me, I hate the absence of movement, too. The thing is, this whole video was just a project for my A/V Tech class (The teacher lets me make animations. I ain't complainin'). By the time this was done it was already a day late. So I just said fuck it and made it still n shit. Because education and stuff. I suppose I have no excuse for the low quality of my videos, though. The only thing I can guarantee is that I'm trying my best to make it and if progress is made, I promise to let it be seen. Thanks for the review.
First off you get my respect for a well paced animation! The models all looked clean and they moved very well! The camera work also did a lot in favor of the flow of the video. References were great and the fact this was a tribute video without a strong story helped the sequencing make sense. The backgrounds were the weakest and I feel they could have had more detail to them, but watching the characters helped make up for that.
Thank's for you're honest crit! I absolutely agree that my BG's could use work but I'm glad you enjoyed the character animation.
I like kissy kissy goo goo and skull squisher.
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